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Three Paid Ad Creatives I Bookmarked This Week (& Why)
What Vue Swiss, Eskiin, and Flakes did to stop my scroll (& what I'd change)
Below are three paid ad creatives I saved to our Foreplay dashboard this week and why I saved them.
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PAID AD CREATIVE 1
Format: Video
Brand: Vue Swiss
Time running: 8 days (but they run a lot of ads like this)
Creative Angle: Pain Point
Creative Targeting: People with skin issues.
Why It’s Bookmarked:
Ad starts with an educational angle.
Product is not introduced until the 15-second mark (36% into the ad). I can’t recommend this approach enough. It will build trust.
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The ad starts with B-Roll of a creator's nose, with extensive blackheads then, 2 seconds in, cuts to B-Roll of the same creator’s nose, now completely void of blackheads. Her nose looks great—it's aspirational and works really well
Social proof towards the end of the ad (product reviews and consumers using the product).
One thing I’d change: I’m 99% sure they used an AI voiceover. I’d try to get someone from their team to record the voiceover next time, or a UGC creator.
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PAID AD CREATIVE 2
Format: Video
Brand: Eskiin
Time running: n/a
Creative Angle: Founder Story + Company Traction
Creative Targeting: Health Conscious Adults.
Why It’s Bookmarked:
“Why is nobody talking about how two siblings proved the entire hair loss industry wrong?” is a really good hook. It’s making me think I have somehow missed this brand’s ascension and should listen up so I can see what the hype is about.
Really great use of B-Roll throughout. Clips of the founder’s sister’s alarming hair loss, the founder in the middle of R&D, showing dirty water and dirty pipes. All really impactful.
Effective job of positioning their product between the cheap versions that don’t do the job vs the expensive ones that look nice but aren’t effective.
One thing I’d change: I’d try to shave off 25% of this asset. A 1:38 social ad is pretty long.
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PAID AD CREATIVE 3
Format: Static
Brand: Flakes
Time running: 137 days
Creative Angle: Us Vs Them
Creative Targeting: People with dandruff.
Why It’s Bookmarked:
Great, on-brand headline.
Dark background (vs an alternative white, bland background).
The brand’s product is subtly highlighted with a light cream, while the “other brand” is almost not highlighted at all.
One thing I’d change: I’d make the value props under the brand’s product intentionally shorter (easier to read) and the “other” brand’s value props intentionally longer (more of a commitment to read).
This week's ad breakdown highlights what's working in paid creative right now: educational hooks, strategic product placement, and strong positioning.
From Vue Swiss to Eskiin to Flakes, these brands prove that scroll-stopping ads prioritize the customer's problem—not just the product.
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